Peer reviews

Response to Shelby Jackson:

I also did my essay on “Where have all the good Men gone?” I guess we both had a different understanding of the prompt. I thought of it as put the different arguments in either of the two chapters not just classify the whole essay. But your understanding makes sense too. Using your way I think you could put more evidence into it. Because this is a rough draft I feel you are going into the right direction and your final project will be excellent. I think this is the best line in your whole essay, “…Next time you ask for the perfect man realize that he probably doesn’t exist.” This statement can play as the devil’s advocate because yes every woman knows the perfect man does not exist… at first, But what happens when you find the one is not that the perfect man you have always wanted?

 

Response to Alexis Aldana:

You and I wrote on the same subject. Although we saw different points I still see where you are coming from. You did a really good job using the writing aspects we learned in class. I felt most of your essay pointed out the good arguments and how they use logos, ethos, or pathos and had evidence. There was only one piece of evidence I did not agree with; you said, “Another statistic that she uses is that girls mature faster than boys and never has that statement been truer than it is in today’s modern world.” I find this false after being in college and living on campus you can see most girls are bitches (excuse my language). Guy’s tend to get along with other guys and I see that as a sign of maturity. Other than that I agree with everything else you said.