Looking from Multiple
Perspectives
STEP ONE: IDENTIFYING STAKEHOLDERS: In order to write a
successful proposal, you need to you need to examine multiple perspectives:
you’ll want to represent as many people’s interests as possible as you describe
your problem and solution, and you’ll want to understand your resisting
audience’s inclinations as you pitch your solution.
For the following arguments, identify different people who
are involved in the issue, people who are directly impacted by the problem
posed, people who officiate the policies involved, people who have legitimate
concerns or investments in the conversation, or other kinds of
stakeholders.
McKemy Junior
High must reconsider its decision to cut music programs.
a.
The music teacher
b.
Current/perspective students in the music
programs
c.
Parents of students
* ASU’s dry campus policy is injurious to the
students and should be amended.
a.
Underage students
b.
Students of age
c.
ASU police
* I propose that the ASU adopts a stricter campus
security in order to keep vagrants and other potentially dangerous individuals
off the school grounds.
a.
Rent-a-cops (ASUPD)
b.
Students increase in tuition
c.
Michael Crow
STEP TWO: Develop
Context: how do these stakeholders interact with one another? Do they have
the same interests, attitudes, or ideas? What do they agree on and what do they
disagree on? Pick one of the debates from the first page and develop a profile
for each stakeholder: what are their commonly held values, objectives, or
beliefs? What kinds of information or experiences get factored into their
decisions?
#1: Music Teacher
This is
their job they are trying to take away. How else are they supposed to find
income? Also I think their beliefs are the same as the student and the parent.
If I had the opportunity to add someone else I would add the board of education
committee. I could see where they would say his/her job is useless. I think
that their experiences would have no effect on the decisions because it
probably ultimately comes down to budget.
#2: Student
I think the students would be the
saving grace for the music program. They could share how it has made them a
better student. And also how they used what they learned to make them a better
person. Also they could say how it is a place to meet new people. Most of the
students or the students that want to be there would have the same beliefs as
the teacher and say don’t cut the music.
#3: Parent
A parent is
also another good voice. They probably have seen improvements in their child as
a student. Also it is an outlet for stress and anger. Most of the time the
parent just wants what is best for the child. I think that all three of these
perspectives coincide with each other. In all most of the people on the board
have probably had children go there music programs and saw how wonderful it is
first hand and only present this option to save money.
STEP THREE: Research: What would be the best method to
represent or address these perspectives in a proposal essay?
#1: Music Teacher
·
State her salary
·
Give examples of her day to day life as a music
teacher
·
Present the negatives of having a music teacher (if
any)
#2: Student
·
Personal stories where music has helped them
overcome a problem
·
Students opinion if they think music should be a
part of their day or not
·
Why they think music is or isn’t a good program
#3: Parent
·
How has music affected your child
·
What was music program like as you were growing
up
·
Is the music program a good use of their money
·
If there was no music program where should the
money be spent
*As I said earlier I would have added board members to my
perspectives. But I was only given three but these would be my 3 to help prove
a point and get it across affectively.
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